Week 3 Presentation
Lyn and Yueyun's comments from my 8 minute presentation:
Thoughtful and developed presentation. I really enjoyed that
I got the joke
Kmart is a good story. Give it a time and date. At the moment it is a bit abstract
Objectives were good
Tell us where your ideas came from e.g. Slow Design principles
Tell everyone that the diagram is yours "ta da!"
Atm it is ambiguous what is yours and what is other people's
Building into a really good story
Make sure your process is in there
Make it obvious how you have developed your ideas
Have it raw
Nice drawings, shows sensitivity
We are seeing good visualisation skills
Work with traditional/noble materials
Warmth, texture, dense
Wood, brass, steel, cork, fabrics, ceramic
Get it right down to the details
Where do they fit in the home?
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