Week 3 Presentation

Lyn and Yueyun's comments from my 8 minute presentation:

• Thoughtful and developed presentation. I really enjoyed that
• I got the joke
• Kmart is a good story. Give it a time and date. At the moment it is a bit abstract
• Objectives were good
• Tell us where your ideas came from e.g. Slow Design principles
• Tell everyone that the diagram is yours "ta da!"
  • Atm it is ambiguous what is yours and what is other people's
• Building into a really good story
• Make sure your process is in there
  • Make it obvious how you have developed your ideas
  • Have it raw
• Nice drawings, shows sensitivity
• We are seeing good visualisation skills
• Work with traditional/noble materials
  • Warmth, texture, dense
  • Wood, brass, steel, cork, fabrics, ceramic
• Get it right down to the details
• Where do they fit in the home?
  • Nest together?